These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?
Nowadays,
Teachers
play Correct article usage
a significiant
significiant
role in every Correct your spelling
significant
ones
life, Change to a genitive case
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their
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constantly
support and teach people with the knowledge they have. But in many countries, Replace the word
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teachers
are getting reduced due to
varied reason
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reasons
this
essay, I will discuss why less
people are showing interest in the professions.
On the one hand, the most important reason why teaching is ignored by constant work Change the quantifier
fewer
persure
and long working hours.BecauseCorrect your spelling
pressure
everyday
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every day
teachers
often work till evenings
teaching and controlling Fix the agreement mistake
evening
student
in Fix the agreement mistake
students
class
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the class
Thus
, they do not get enough time to spend with their family. Secondally
, they are paid very low compared to Correct your spelling
Secondly
other profession
. Change the wording
another profession
other professions
For example
, a teachers
in Ha Noi earns a salary of 8 million VND compared to other professions, where the salary is at least 15 million VND Correct the article-noun agreement
teacher
such
as IT
profession. Raising the Correct article usage
the IT
miniun
wage Correct your spelling
minimum
of
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for
teachers
will sinificantly
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a
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profession
.
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professionals
On the other hand
, the problem is the difficult behaviour exhibited by secondary level
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secondary-level
students
. The number of students
has not behaveir
well by Correct your spelling
behaving
behave
behaviour
teachers
. For instance
, more and more students
have an attiude
of Correct your spelling
attitude
argaing
with their teacher. Correct your spelling
arguing
In addition
, student
begin to feel bored with Fix the agreement mistake
students
studies
, so they Correct pronoun usage
their studies
started
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tostarted
schools
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school
That is
to say, the teachers
often have to deal with this
type of student and that makes them leave thier
job. To Correct your spelling
their
the
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this
issue, the missbehaviour
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students
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the teacher
a teacher
teacher
should be considered as a serious Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
offense
. The administration should take strict actionChange the spelling
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apply
it
.
In conclusion, teaching is Change preposition
against it
less
popular job these days because of some Add an article
a less
issue
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issues
,
less Remove the comma
apply
teache's
salaries, stress Change noun form
teachers'
full
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of full
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workload and Change preposition
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the missbehaviour
missbehaviour
of Correct your spelling
misbehaviour
students
. I believe that school
administration can provide some solutions for these concerns.Correct article usage
the school
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