These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

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life,
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support and teach people with the knowledge they have. But in many countries,
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people are showing interest in the professions. On the one hand, the most important reason why teaching is ignored by constant work
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,
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teaching and controlling
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, they do not get enough time to spend with their family.
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, they are paid very low compared to
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teachers
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in Ha Noi earns a salary of 8 million VND compared to other professions, where the salary is at least 15 million VND
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as
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profession. Raising the
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, the problem is the difficult behaviour exhibited by
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students
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. The number of
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behaving
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, more and more
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have an
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attitude
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arguing
with their teacher.
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,
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begin to feel bored with
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to say, the
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type of student and that makes them leave
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this
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issue, the
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should be considered as a serious
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. The administration should take strict action
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it
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. In conclusion, teaching is
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popular job these days because of some
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like
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less
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salaries, stress
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workload and
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the missbehaviour
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missbehaviour
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misbehaviour
of
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. I believe that
school
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the school
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administration can provide some solutions for these concerns.
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