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Art is a skill and a talent and so it should not be taught at universities. Do you agree or disagree?

#art #skill #talent #universities
Some
people
 are born with a natural talent for craft
while
 others are hardworking to learn how to paint. The majority believe that
art
 should not be taught in university because it is an innate skill.
However
, I don't hold the same view.
People
 have an inborn talent that they are already good in craftsmanship.
However
, teachers can help them to improve their skills. Prodigies might be already good but with proper guidance, they can hone their artistry much better and even unlock new ones. They can learn different strategies from their peers as well. Learning should not end with oneself but with the help of others. Those with no talent can acquire
art
 skills by attending
art
 classes. craft skill may not be for everyone but if the pupil works hard and really like to learn,
then
this
 class is important to them.
Furthermore
, crafts can
also
 help young kids to relieve stress and show through paintings what they really feel. Beautiful craft is not about how pretty it is but about the meaning behind it.
In addition
, learning it in university is
also
 a good way to interact with
people
 with different views. It is important to have other
people
 critic crafts to know exactly how someone can change their style
that is
 better for others. Even though criticism can be hurtful, it is always better to know what can be improved in someone else's craftsmanship. In my perspective,
art
 should still be taught in the academy.
Although
, students who have an innate skill already have an advantage in
art
. Teaching kids in university is still better. I believe that students will learn faster if they are in the academy.
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