THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE RESULT OF A SURVEY ABOUT PEOPLE'S COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE AUSTRAKIAN CITIES.

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The bar graph illustrates the information about the crowd's purchasing and consuming tea and caffeine in five different Australian regions.

Overall

, what stands out from the chart is that there is a almost similar shift in all five areas of Australia, and the population of Melbourne went to cafes more than any other,

whereas

Brisbane consumed very less fresh cappuccino when compared to others. In the details, around 43% of the population of all the cities went to cafes to drink tea and coffee in the past 4 weeks and not far from 50% of people take instant espresso in the prior 4 weeks.

Likewise

, more than 60% crowd bought fresh coffee in the previous 4 weeks.

However

, there was an upward gradual shift in people who bought instant and fresh coffee in the past few days.

Submitted by anishakumarileemani on Wed Mar 29 2023

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THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE RESULT OF A SURVEY ABOUT PEOPLE'S COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE AUSTRAKIAN CITIES.

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