THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE RESULT OF A SURVEY ABOUT PEOPLE'S COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE AUSTRAKIAN CITIES.

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The bar graph illustrates the information about the crowd's purchasing and consuming tea and caffeine in five different Australian regions.

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, what stands out from the chart is that there is a almost similar shift in all five areas of Australia, and the population of Melbourne went to cafes more than any other,

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Brisbane consumed very less fresh cappuccino when compared to others. In the details, around 43% of the population of all the cities went to cafes to drink tea and coffee in the past 4 weeks and not far from 50% of people take instant espresso in the prior 4 weeks.

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, more than 60% crowd bought fresh coffee in the previous 4 weeks.

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, there was an upward gradual shift in people who bought instant and fresh coffee in the past few days.

anishakumarileemaniWed Mar 29 2023

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THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE RESULT OF A SURVEY ABOUT PEOPLE'S COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE AUSTRAKIAN CITIES.

Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, owning a home than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case? Do you think this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In the advertising, businesses nowadaways usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you thinkn it is a positive or negative development?

In many countries, schoolchildren are required to wear school uniforms. ‏Do you think this should this be enforced in all schools?

Write a letter to friend to ask him/her to take care of your children while are away for a business trip. Tell her: - What food do they love to eat - What activities they like to do - What arrangements you have made to pick them