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THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE RESULT OF A SURVEY ABOUT PEOPLE'S COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE AUSTRAKIAN CITIES.

THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE RESULT OF A SURVEY ABOUT PEOPLE'S COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE AUSTRAKIAN CITIES.
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The bar graph illustrates the information about the crowd's purchasing and consuming tea and caffeine in five different Australian regions.
Overall
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, what stands out from the chart is that there is a almost similar shift in all five areas of Australia, and the population of Melbourne went to cafes more than any other,
whereas
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 Brisbane consumed very less fresh cappuccino when compared to others. In the details, around 43% of the population of all the cities went to cafes to drink tea and coffee in the past 4 weeks and not far from 50% of people take instant espresso in the prior 4 weeks.
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, more than 60% crowd bought fresh coffee in the previous 4 weeks.
However
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, there was an upward gradual shift in people who bought instant and fresh coffee in the past few days.
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