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Scientist and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artist. To what extent do you agree.

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In contemporary
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 ,there is a held view that the work of researchers and technologists is rated higher than that of people in the entertainment field. I completely agree with
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 opinion for reasons like the lack of scientific staff and the significance of technology for humanity.
Science
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 is constantly evolving, so the majority of scientific discoveries need
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 promotion.
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 means that new inventions require a large number of professionals, who are very few. There are cases when scientists refine their findings for years, which causes a kind of
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 paucity.
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,
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 the country development strategies of Kazakhstan , in the near future, the country's population needs to focus on academic success. A variety of scholarships is allocated annually to high school students in order to acquire the best
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 education and secure a job in experimental workplaces. One of the crucial reasons is that
science
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 substantially makes people's lives easier. Scientific workers have been overworked for the whole working process in spite of sacrificing their personal
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. The majority of goods, which people are consuming these days are the result of technology. Workers aim to provide humankind with a comfortable
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 with all the essential needs. As an example, Alexander Bell is an inventor who is credited with patenting the first telephone. Thanks to him, the appearance and functions of the phone have been improved to the current state.
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science
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 and technology specialists are considered more respected for their contribution, and knowledge when compared to artists. I totally agree with
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, the achievements of scientists advance the quality of society’s
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 much more than the attainments of art or music.
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