You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.

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The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010

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, during

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four-year period, Outokumumpu companies' euros un irregular diagram.

In addition

2006-2010,

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the euro's

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euro's

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euro

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fluctuated wildly, but the line was upward

then

declined dramatically after that levelled off.

detalis

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details

Now,turning to the

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details

detalis

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details

in the middle of 2006-2007 the value of the euro

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increased

incressed

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increased

increases

.Compared to 2006, it increased by 4.5

price

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prices

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in 2008, and

then

in 2010, the price

levellod

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levelled

off in four years.

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.

Some people say that it is not possible to be happy without money, while others think that money does not guarantee happiness. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that more money should be spent on protecting endangeret species while others think it is a waste of valuable money. What is your opinion?

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Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.