You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.
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The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010
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, during
this
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four-year period, Outokumumpu companies' euros un irregular diagram.
In addition
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2006-2010,
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the euro's
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euro's
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euro
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fluctuated wildly, but the line was upward
then
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declined dramatically after that levelled off.
detalis
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details
Now,turning to the
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details
detalis
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details
in the middle of 2006-2007 the value of the euro
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increased
incressed
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increased
increases
.Compared to 2006, it increased by 4.5
price
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prices
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in 2008, and
then
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in 2010, the price
levellod
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levelled
off in four years.
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