Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discus both views.
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The
people
are more consern
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concern
concerned
animals
are
getting hurt by living in Unnecessary verb
apply
the
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apply
zoos
but it
another point is that certain types of Correct pronoun usage
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the animal
an animal
animal
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animals
also
need to only kept by the zoo
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both views of the statement.
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be
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be
in the Remove the redundancy
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zoo
but not in every species. Some of
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the
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animals
have to be kept in the
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zoos
but not every types
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type
them
like a dog or a cat. Correct pronoun usage
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, if the animal is a type is
prohibited Correct pronoun usage
that is
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for
people
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the animal
an animal
animal
must have a specific rule to own and need only able to be Fix the agreement mistake
animals
own
by Wrong verb form
owned
the
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zoos
or an organisation that have
knowledge about them. Change the verb form
has
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kind of animals
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animal
a
normal Correct article usage
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people
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be able to own. They do not need to be in Change the verb form
apply
the
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zoos
.
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appropriate for Add an article
the animal
an animal
animal
to be able Fix the agreement mistake
animals
entertraining
and ecologically as well. For the reason is that many Correct your spelling
entertaining
enter training
zoo
have Change to a plural noun
zoos
not
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treat
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treated
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the animal
animal
well enough to make Fix the agreement mistake
animals
animal
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animals
suiable
or in a good condition to show something to Correct your spelling
suitable
people
in a zoo
. For instance
, if we caught animals
in a bad environment of
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in
zoos
or not
provide Add a missing verb
do not
a good food
for Remove the article
good food
a portion of good food
animals
. This
might lead to not appropriate
for anima to be in the Add a missing verb
being appropriate
zoo
and work for people
.
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have thier
own perspective on how we should Correct your spelling
their
kept
the Change the verb form
keep
animals
by
caring about them to getting hurt or to forcing Change preposition
from
to
work for Correct pronoun usage
them to
entertraining
but in Correct your spelling
entertaining
this
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views
on both Fix the agreement mistake
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