The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured
The following diagram illustrates how instant noodles are manufactured.
Overall
, there are 8 stages to manufacturing instant noodles.
First of all, the truck has full of flour which pours into storage siles. Linking Words
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, they combine with water and oil in the mixer. Next stage, they dought sheets by rollers. In the fourth stage, they become dough strips which become noodle discs. In the sixth stage, they cook and dry them with oil and put them in vegetable species cups. In the end, the cups are Linking Words
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