Artificial Intelligence will soon replace teachers in the classroom. Do you agree with this statement? What is an alternative to traditional face-to-face learning?

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schools in the near future. I totally
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technology
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their life way easier, especially schools are getting more advantages from them to teach the
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things and only teachers can read their
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and can give proper guidance to them that how they can improve themselves.
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but the understanding of the topic can only provide by the teachers.
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doing their homework but the detailed work can only happen if the tutor had taught the child in
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manner. Various alternatives are there to replace the traditional coaching
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online courses if the student is far away from the school or any college and by sitting at home they can take advantage of the topics and gain knowledge as much as they can . In
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one virtual class at the
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of the week and provide
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presentations
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private message . In conclusion,
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classroom can not be
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direct communication with the professor where the
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to do that.
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