Many cities are now turning parks and farmland into new housing developments. Is this a positive or negative development?

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majority

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the majority

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of

lands

for farming and

parks

are being

alterned

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altered

to

lands

which are used for building new houses. In my opinion, in spite of numeral positive trends, there are negative ones as well. On the one hand, cutting down farmlands and

parks

are turning them in place of residences will

accomodate

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accommodate

nowaday's

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needs. Mainly because of an increasing

number of

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population, the authority should construct living places to supply them. To illustrate, in many countries people are experiencing

shortage

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a shortage

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of accommodation.

Furthermore

, humanity can

transite

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translate

transmit

their lifestyle to

modern

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a modern

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one

via

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decreasing the amount of land for farming, because, urbanisation requests modern and developed activities from humans

comparing

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to farmlands.

As a result

, the government can enhance

due

to

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reducing undeveloped work-field

as well as

farming.

On the other hand

,

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the negative

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impact of building new houses

instead

of

parks

and

lands

using

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used

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for farming is that people may face

to

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apply

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some challenges

which

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apply

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are related to

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the suplement

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suplement

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supplement

of food, because of the fact that farmland

are

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is

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the spot of products

of

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for

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meals. When it comes to

parks

, they are

main

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places of entertainment and joy. If

parks

are vanished

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vanish

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, how can people entertain in their

leasure

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leisure

time? in conclusion, as everything has

positive

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a positive

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and negative

impact

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impacts

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,

although

positive aspects of

development

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the development

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of houses at the place of perks and

lands

for farming are available, it has some negative elements.