With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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people
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a
significant productivity. An improvement Remove the article
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health care, it is said that Change preposition
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people
have to pay attention more on
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people
that their number has increased. It might worry people
whether they could handle this
urgency. I am personally sure that this
increasing number of old retired people
is not a big deal as those very aged people
are also
human. They are no more than weak.
Caring grandmas
or grandpas sometimes feels like treating babies. They need others to take care of their own selves, but the difference is there is Change preposition
for grandmas
not
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no
a
hope as children have, but only gratitude for what they have done Remove the article
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to
society. Change preposition
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Although
it seems burden
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people
, they do not need travelling
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should not worry of
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about
elderly's
increasing number is that some of them still want to be productive as Correct article usage
the elderly's
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happens
in some Wrong verb form
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country
like Germany and Singapore, Fix the agreement mistake
countries
for instance
. People
in age 65 and more, remain working as waiters, even. It is reported that they do not do it for money. Instead
, they work because of habit or pleasure. Regarding these two countries, people
around the world could manage their elderly community to find their preference
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contribute
to society.
In conclusion, if Change the verb form
contributes
people
could see deeply, elderly people
are not burdens
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be burdens
their
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on their
Furthermore
, what people
can do towards this
situation is as usual that is
to assist people
in need whether what they need is money or an opportunity.Submitted by salwafahanim on
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