Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the disadvantages of this trend outweigh the advantages?

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There is no evidence between areas year by year. These days a number of

people

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recommend to each other their traditional clothing, announcements, trends,

way

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of consuming and

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watching television programs. From my point of view, the disadvantages of these actions are higher than the advantages. Nowadays we are living in a world where technology is well developed and

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is creating for individuals perfect opportunities to know more about other

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traditions.

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, social media is the most popular

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of sharing information, which makes

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aware of other cultures. Because by sharing information about local things,

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as what is tradable now or which merchandise is popular among locals. It helps

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to live more comfortably and avoid being less informed about other countries peoples'

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of living.

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, sharing information about local communities can be quite

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unpleasant

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, because it can seriously affect the country's trade and traditions. Many

people

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claim that they should not let others know about their own culture, as it can lead to some kind of confusion between cultures. Each country has their own

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of expressing, living and working and these are the main differences between them.

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people

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share their own local lifestyle secrets with other nations and

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is a negative viewpoint as it effects seriously on their lives.

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Cultural globalization
Cultural exchange
Cross-cultural communication
Assimilation
Homogenization
Acculturation
Traditional customs
Local economies
Diversity
Inclusion

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Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the disadvantages of this trend outweigh the advantages?

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You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. In the letter, you should: • Where you stayed • What the problems were • How they can fix your complaints

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