Write a letter to a friend who worked at your previous company. You have moved to a new job in a new city. • describe your city • describe your job • describe the arrangements for him to visit you Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....,

#friend #company #job #city #arrangements #visit #addresses

Dear John Macpherson

This

is to express my joy in inviting you on a

city

tour of Ipswich

city

. As you are aware that I left my previous job at Milton. You are one of the best office colleagues. I want to invite you for a

city

tour of Ipswich. There are a number of attraction are available to indulge in .

Furthermore

, here I am working as a chief accountant looking after the entire accounting team and responsible for accounting report submission to head office.

moreover

,My job is not too demanding and I have plenty of time to visit nearby sights in the vicinity.

Therefore

, I have decided to make a plan for sightseeing in Ipswich

city

. I have arranged your accommodation at my house. it's a large three bedroom hall kitchen flat with all amenities.You will definitely enjoy your stay with us. ,

Also

we have barbeque which we can enjoy in the evenings. Looking forward to your quick response . Yours sincerely Mike Walsh

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

167 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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