The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The two line charts illustrate the
percent
change in ownership of electronics and how long people in one country spent doing Change the spelling
per cent
houseworks
in a week from 1920 to 2019.
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housework
Overall
, opposed
to the percentage of electronics ownership, the number of hours for housework declined. Even though Correct word choice
as opposed
washing
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the washing
machine
faced a Fix the agreement mistake
machines
slightly
fluctuation, all three electronic products experienced an Change the adverb
slight
up-ward
trend.
The first line graph shows that the ratio of Correct your spelling
upward
refirgerator
was the lowest in 1920, Correct your spelling
refrigerator
then
the percentage rised
sharply from that lowest point to the highest point at around 100% in 1960 and remained at that rate until 2019. Starting at a higher percentage, the ownership of vacuum Correct your spelling
rises
rose
risen
cleaner
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cleaners
also
rised
and reached the same highest Correct your spelling
rose
percent
as the refrigerator. The increment of vacuum Replace the word
percentage
cleaner
is much Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
more
steadier than that of washing Change the word
apply
machine
, which experienced a drop between 1960 and 1980 and continued to grow to just above 70% in 2019.
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machines
On the other hand
, in 2019 people spent time on their housework less than in 1920. The rate, which use to be as high as around 50 hours per week, declined simultaneously until the lowest number at just over 10 hours per week.Submitted by purita.w on
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