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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
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The line graph below illustrates how much
waste
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 was produced in three companies in the period from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
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, Companies A and B experienced decreases
while
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company
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 C had seen increases and reached higher
result
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 during
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period from 200 to 2015.
Company
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 A was shown the highest result of 12
waste
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 in
tonic
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 in 2000. From 2000 to the end of the year
Company
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 A saw a slow decline at 12 metric tons about 8.5
waste
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 in tones.
Company
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 B was 8.5
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 in tons in
the
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2000 year but in 2005 had seen a rapid increase from 8.5 to 10
waste
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 in
tonic
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. After the change
Company
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 B went down significantly to three
waste
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 in the
tonic
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 at end of the period.
Company
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 C had reached the hugest stage to
produce
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of
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waste
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 in
tonic
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 at nearly 4 and reached
to
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10
waste
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 in
tonic
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, company, tonic with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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