The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
The line graph below illustrates how much
waste
was produced in three companies in the period from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
, Companies A and B experienced decreases
while
company
C had seen increases and reached higher
result
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period from 200 to 2015.
Company
A was shown the highest result of 12
waste
in
tonic
in 2000. From 2000 to the end of the year
Company
A saw a slow decline at 12 metric tons about 8.5
waste
in tones.
Company
B was 8.5
waste
in tons in
the
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2000 year but in 2005 had seen a rapid increase from 8.5 to 10
waste
in
tonic
. After the change
Company
B went down significantly to three
waste
in the
tonic
at end of the period.
Company
C had reached the hugest stage to
produce
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waste
in
tonic
at nearly 4 and reached
to
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10
waste
in
tonic
.
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