Some people believe that living in an apartment instead of a university dormitory has many advantages while others say that it has many disadvantages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in an apartment instead of a university dormitory.
One of the social concerns today relates to which accommodations should
students
choose when they enter the
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While
it is often argued that living in an apartment
is always the best choice, others believe that university
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a university
dormitory
is better. In my opinion, I would rather choose apartment
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an apartment
instead
of dormitory
.
On the one hand, living in an Add an article
the dormitory
a dormitory
apartment
gives people
more space and freedom environment. This
means that people
can do whatever they want when they rent an apartment
. Students
can decorate their room
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people
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the student
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wants to have any complex troubles with their roommates and renting an Fix the agreement mistake
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apartment
is the best way to avoid this
problem. It is also
possible to say that not all roommates are polite and they are not able to live peacefully with the others. For example
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because they have some arguments or they cannot stand the way their roommates live.
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On the other hand
, living in an apartment
can has
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students
have allowances from their parents so it may not be a big deal for them. Add an article
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However
, not all people
have enough money to live in an apartment
. Normally, university students
have to find a part-time job to pay for the rent bills and other expenses. It may be exhausted
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people
because they have to balance between
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For instance
, many students
often complain that they don't have enough time to study when they offered
a part-time job.
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students
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