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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.
#land #millions #hectares #parts #world
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A glance at the table provided reveals
that
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how many
hectares
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 of
lands
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that
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can be used as forests in terms of six areas in 1990, 2000 and 2005.(units:
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,
it is clear that
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the
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Europe had the most
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the
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forest area, compared to the least that of
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Oceania
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.
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, only the European forests expanded and the number of Asia showed a small fluctuation.over
this
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 period of years. In terms of Europe, the number of forested
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 was by far the highest, at 989 in 1990, which increased to 1001, almost rising by 120
hectares
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 in the
last
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 year. Asia shared a slight decrease in 2000, reducing by merely 6
hectares
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 but went up to the peak of 584
hectares
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 in 2005.
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, the figure for Africa and South Africa shared a decrease dramatically, stood at 749 and 946 separately,
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 fell to the bottom of 691 and 882
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 each in 2005.
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, the Oceanian area and North America kept a stable number of nearly 200 and approximately 700
hectares
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 in those years respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hectares with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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