Some people think that schools should choose students according to their academic abilities, while others think it is better to have students of different abilities studying together. Discuss both view and give your own opinion

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over the

criteria’

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schools

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for schools

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to select

students

.

While

some claim that it is essential for those to pick up pupils with the same studying

abilities

, the opposite holds a strong view that

schools

ought to make opportunities for all

students

with different levels of

knowledge

to study together.

While

the former is valid to some extent, I consider myself an advocate of the latter. Without a shadow of a doubt, selecting

students

have

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homogeneous academic aptitudes, which is pivotal for

schools

. Because

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pupils will have an educational environment suitable for their

abilities

especially

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for talented individuals.

For instance

, Hanoi-Amsterdam High school for the Gifted regularly chooses candidates who have high academic results in the entrance high school exam

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Hence

,

schools

had better choose

students

depending on their educational

abilities

.

While

the redeeming feature of choosing similar scholars'

abilities

is widely acknowledged, it is better if

integrating

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students

with different aptitudes. On the grounds that all

students

will have a chance to exchange

knowledge

with one another.

For example

, Vietnam has international school systems where they have no entrance exams and

also

encourage learning groups. By doing so,

students

can freely exchange and digest

knowledge

without feeling pressured.

Therefore

, mixing

students

with different

abilities

is taken into more and more consideration.

To sum up

,

although

picking up scholars

according to

their level’s

knowledge

brings some positive affection, I think all pupils should have opportunities to absorb insights equally whether their academic

abilities

are good or bad.