Some people think that schools should choose students according to their academic abilities, while others think it is better to have students of different abilities studying together. Discuss both view and give your own opinion

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schools

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to select

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some claim that it is essential for those to pick up pupils with the same studying

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, the opposite holds a strong view that

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ought to make opportunities for all

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with different levels of

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to study together.

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the former is valid to some extent, I consider myself an advocate of the latter. Without a shadow of a doubt, selecting

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homogeneous academic aptitudes, which is pivotal for

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pupils will have an educational environment suitable for their

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for talented individuals.

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, Hanoi-Amsterdam High school for the Gifted regularly chooses candidates who have high academic results in the entrance high school exam

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had better choose

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depending on their educational

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the redeeming feature of choosing similar scholars'

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is widely acknowledged, it is better if

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students

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with different aptitudes. On the grounds that all

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will have a chance to exchange

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with one another.

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, Vietnam has international school systems where they have no entrance exams and

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encourage learning groups. By doing so,

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can freely exchange and digest

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without feeling pressured.

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, mixing

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with different

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is taken into more and more consideration.

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picking up scholars

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their level’s

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brings some positive affection, I think all pupils should have opportunities to absorb insights equally whether their academic

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are good or bad.