A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter -Describe what this book was about -Explain how this book influenced you -Say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir/ Madam I am writing

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letter to provide my contribution that you would like to include in a magazine for an article called “The

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that influenced me most’. The

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that influenced me the most is about the motivation for readers and how to live in

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world where there are a lot of

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who are dishonest. To be more precise, it is written by a famous author, Chit Oo Nyo and it is regarding a fatherless child.

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, it is a motivational

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,especially for youngsters who have grown up without a father in order to be stronger in their lives

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they don’t receive care from their father. Why

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book

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influenced me because I am fatherless and I got depression in my adolescence. In

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book

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, it is mentioned how to treat

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around me and how to improve positive thinking.

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, I realise how to control my mind when I am facing a problem and to solve it calmly. After reading

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, my self-confidence improved and I become optimistic as I could learn how to forgive other

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's mistakes ,

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, I am easily angry and I could not control my temper before. I believe that

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book

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can help other

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in order to improve their ways of living in

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world. I trust that my contributions will be valuable to include in a magazine. Yours faithfully Sandar Myint

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

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241 words

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