You had a very good experience in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to a newspaper to tell them about it, describe what you liked about it, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you regarding brown's request to notify your newspaper of excellent business in the local area.
Last
weekend, I went to My Indigo restaurant with my cousins. The staff were very friendly and welcoming. They arrived for
order
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the order
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quickly and
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the foods
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foods
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the foods
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were very delicious and inexpensive. Not only
this
, drinks were reasonably priced. The restaurant was very neat and clean. We enjoyed very
things
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like music,
food
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and food
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. The service of
this
rastaurant
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restaurant
was excellent. One more thing, there is a huge space for parking in front of the
reataurant
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restaurant
. I hope you will public
this
letter so that other people in the area can
also
enjoy the food of
this
restaurant.
Your
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sincerely, Aman
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