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You live with a roommate at university but you have trouble studying because of a problem related to your roommate. Write a letter to an administrator at your university and include: Who you are The problem What you suggest they do

#roommate #university #trouble #administrator
Dear Mr Williams, My name is John, a student in
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 year
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 a mass communication course.I am writing
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 letter to bring to your notice the issues that I have been facing for quite a long because of my new roommate. Since he is a guitarist, he always plays his musical instrument at night.
This
 causes a lot of disturbance to me as I am the person who studies during that time only.
Apart from
this
, he plays various tones at a large volume which disrupts my focus whenever I read books.
Although
 requested him multiple times, he did not bother
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 words and ignored me every time.
Therefore
, warn him and send a notice to mend his ways.
Moreover
, make him aware
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 the university guidelines
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 cooperative behaviour with a room partner. Other than
this
, please limit the duration of playing
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 till 10pm in the notice so that I could do reading afterwards. Kindly solve
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 crucial problem as soon as possible as my exams are approaching in two weeks. Looking forward to a quick and favourable response. Yours sincerely, Ryan Grantham
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation
  • residential advisor
  • disruptive
  • concentration
  • mediation
  • compliance
  • amicable
  • tenable
  • rectify
  • study habits
  • commons area
  • quiet hours
  • academic achievement
  • cohabitation
  • lifestyle conflict
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