Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has a negative effect on their social lives. To what do you agree or disagree?

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The amount of

time

people

spend seeing their

friends

has diminished. The main cause is that modern forms of

communication

such

as WhatsApp, telegram and other

communication

apps.

This

has a detrimental effect on social lives. In my view, I agree that the

time

people

spend seeing their

friends

is essential, albeit life requirements can be caused to separate

people

from their

friends

. One of the major reasons, the

time

people

spend seeing their

friends

is essential is that it helps each other.

For example

, I need to repair some of the places in my home, which alone I can not do

Correct pronoun usage

apply

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Although

I can call my friend to come to help me in

this

situation. We can do it very fast and obviously. If my friend had been far away I could not repair it on my own. I need to find some builder for reparation, which it takes more

time

to fund and I should pay him for reparation. Another example is that at the weekend they can spend their

time

happily, like organising some parties or going to the cinema.

Nevertheless

, modern forms of

communication

such

as email and messaging play an equally important role between

people

and their

friends

For instance

people

prefer to spend

time

with

friends

or have a home near their

friends

, albeit the main cause of being distance between

people

is distance and their

friends

is a life requirement. In

this

situation, modern forms of

communication

like email and messaging play an equally important role.

People

can use

this

type of

communication

and obviously be aware of the circumstances of their

friends

However

, in my childhood, I had a good friend and we spent a lot of

time

with each other,

although

they relocated their home far away. There are for that we did not use modern

communication

, to

this

time

we are not in contact. In conclusion,

while

I agree that

people

spend their

time

on face-to-face chat is an essential part of

people

's relationships, I firmly assert that using modern ways of

communication

is remarkably important for those who lack

time

to meet.

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Topic Vocabulary:

modern forms of communication
email
messaging
reduce
amount of time
see friends
social lives
technology
communication
faster
convenient
stay in touch
connect
online
social media platforms
meet new people
face-to-face interactions
maintain relationships
excessive reliance
social isolation
digital communication
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