The bar chart below shows Scotland's exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014.

The bar chart  below shows Scotland's exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world  for the year 2014.
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The bar chart gives information about the value of the
exports
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made in different industries in 2014 from Scotland to the
rest
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of the UK and the
rest
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of the world.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
exports
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to the
rest
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of the world were generally greater for all categories except for the electrical and instrument engineering
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. Regarding the
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to the
rest
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of the UK, roughly half of the 9 categories of commercial activities brought in less than 2
billion
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pounds
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.
Whereas
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, the biggest income came from the business of chemicals & mineral products at 5
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pounds
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, just followed by the manufacturing of food and drink and the electrical & instrument engineering ones, each at approximately 4
billion
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.  About the
exports
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to the
rest
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of the world,  contrastingly to the ones directed from Scotland to the other areas of the UK, there was no category with an export worth less than 2
billion
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pounds
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, as the smallest revenue came from the electrical & instrumental engineering branch at 2.3
billion
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.
On the other hand
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, business & financial services, hotel & restaurant services fields made the most valuable
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, precisely worth 13.8
billion
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pounds
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, rest, billion, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exports
  • International regions
  • Trade relationships
  • Economic impact
  • Market analysis
  • Notable differences
  • Trade trends
  • Speculation
  • Variation
  • Significance
  • Impact
  • Prevalent factors
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