The bar chart below shows Scotland's exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014.

The bar chart  below shows Scotland's exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world  for the year 2014.
The bar chart gives information about the value of the
exports
made in different industries in 2014 from Scotland to the
rest
of the UK and the
rest
of the world.
Overall
, it can be seen that
exports
to the
rest
of the world were generally greater for all categories except for the electrical and instrument engineering
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. Regarding the
exports
to the
rest
of the UK, roughly half of the 9 categories of commercial activities brought in less than 2
billion
pounds
.
Whereas
, the biggest income came from the business of chemicals & mineral products at 5
billion
pounds
, just followed by the manufacturing of food and drink and the electrical & instrument engineering ones, each at approximately 4
billion
.  About the
exports
to the
rest
of the world,  contrastingly to the ones directed from Scotland to the other areas of the UK, there was no category with an export worth less than 2
billion
pounds
, as the smallest revenue came from the electrical & instrumental engineering branch at 2.3
billion
.
On the other hand
, business & financial services, hotel & restaurant services fields made the most valuable
exports
, precisely worth 13.8
billion
pounds
.
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  • Exports
  • International regions
  • Trade relationships
  • Economic impact
  • Market analysis
  • Notable differences
  • Trade trends
  • Speculation
  • Variation
  • Significance
  • Impact
  • Prevalent factors
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