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Living In A Country Where You Have To Speak A Foreign Language Can Cause Serious Social And Practical Problems

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Language
 is one of the things that most distinguish one culture from another and,
therefore
, if a person wants to integrate himself into a foreign country he has to learn as soon as possible the
language
 of the hosting state and of the
people
 living there. Learning fastly a new
language
 is very useful to mingle with new
people
 and it allows you easily to look for new work. The new technology has made
easier
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it easier
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 to eliminate the barriers which divide
people
 with different cultures and languages.
For example
, every
people
 with a smartphone can use google
translator
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 to understand new words or to let them understand their own think and what they want.
Furthermore
, with the same
simplicity
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 everyone can move to a new city using google maps and all its useful tools. Some countries need only workers that know to speak in local
language
 to assign them to skilled work
otherwise
 for them there are only low-skilled workers without any possibilities to improve their social position.
On the other hand
, some problems in integrating with a new culture remain because it's not always simple to overcome the distrust of the natives towards
people
 with different traditions and cultures and knowing the local
language
 is not enough and it takes a lot of time and lot of willpower. In conclusion, speaking a foreign tongue has more benefits in terms of both education and carrier. So, learning a local
language
 is beneficial for all who are living in a foreign country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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