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n many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects. Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

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A debate over whether or not international
tourism
 should be an important way to develop the economy has gained attention.
While
 some
people
 argue that it has a negative
impacts
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. I personally believe that the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages. First of all, developing international
tourism
 allows the local
people
 to improve their income.
This
 is because the local government tend to build some grand hotels with good services or new buildings with the aspect of the special local culture, which might enable to attract more visitors
all
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from all
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 over the world. For
isntance
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instance
, jobs
of
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in
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 holiday resorts and some sales jobs are available for the local
people
.
As a consequence
, when inhabitants find it easy to get a job, they are able to earn more money compared to the past. Another advantage is that international
tourism
 could enhance the social skill of local residents. To be more specific, developing international
tourism
 enables the local communities
have
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 more
chance
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 to get
along with
the
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international visitors.
For example
, when
people
who
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are exposed to
the
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diffenrent
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different
 culture and
behaviors
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behaviours
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, they will be aware that
such
diffenrences
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differences
 are the norm of the world. Meanwhile,
people
 should be encouraged to respect these differences,
thus
 learning to stand in the other person's shoes.
This
 process can cultivate
the
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empathy which contributes to
increase
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 the social skill of local settlers. In conclusion, I
reaffrim
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reaffirm
 my position that the
benifits
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benefits
 of international
tourism
 far outweigh its drawbacks. Increasing the income of local dwellers and improving their social
skill
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skills
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 both have far-reaching
meaning
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meanings
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.
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