In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?
In recent years, living in an owned house has mainly become a demand of plenty of dwellers in many regions
instead
of hiring. I am of the belief that this
tendency has merits due to
possessing dwelling
makes them feel Correct article usage
a dwelling
Correct article usage
a sence
sence
of security and not affected by economical stagnation .
Correct your spelling
sense
To embark
Fix the infinitive
Embark
on
, despite the fact that renting Change preposition
apply
apartment
Correct article usage
an apartment
faciliates
departure in Correct your spelling
facilitates
facilities
megaceities
Correct your spelling
megacities
mega cities
where
Correct word choice
that
have
all civil amenities, Unnecessary verb
apply
aciquiring
a flat Correct your spelling
acquiring
are
more Change the verb form
is
stability
and Replace the word
stable
safier
. Correct your spelling
safer
In other words
, if many citizens have possessed mansions, they are not exploited by realtors and have the right to chose
or change what they want in their houses without restrictions. Wrong verb form
choose
For instance
, in Egypt, owning property are
considered one of the necessities for most Correct subject-verb agreement
is
the
nation to have a secure Change preposition
of the
live
. Replace the word
life
Hence
, what can be said is that coolecting
finances for having Correct your spelling
collecting
ownerships
are quintessential these days.
Fix the agreement mistake
ownership
In addition
, many countries are presently suffering from economic recessions and most of
Change preposition
apply
individuals
do not have high salaries to pay the hire's price, Add an article
the individuals
thus
, buying dwellings may be a solution to insure
Correct your spelling
ensure
preserving
from these impacts. Replace the word
preservation
This
mean
that when dwellers Change the verb form
means
aquire
Correct your spelling
acquire
Correct article usage
a living's
living's
area, they accept extra Change noun form
living
peyments
to spend Correct your spelling
payments
it
in another way Correct pronoun usage
apply
insteat
of Correct your spelling
instead
put
it Wrong verb form
putting
in
Change preposition
into
renting
. Replace the word
rent
For example
, with the economic global crisis experienced in plenty of parts of the world
many Add a comma
,world
nation
do not able to pay Change to a plural noun
nations
their
hiring. Eventually, not only has Change preposition
for their
accommidation
in special place a positive lifeCorrect your spelling
accommodation
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
it provide
more income to expense in another useful Change the verb form
provides
suituation
.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
situation
after
this
essay has manifested the piont
mentioned above, it can be reiterated that Correct your spelling
point
points
Correct article usage
a stablized
stablized
house strengthens the bonds between members of Correct your spelling
stabilized
family
and the region Add an article
the family
that
they live. And I agree with the former viewChange preposition
in that
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