Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Children

are the gist of life, and as parents, we need to consider and discuss whether phones are friends or foes to our

children

. Each age group differs dramatically in it

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and desires and so on.

This

article will discuss why is it important for

children

to obtain smart devices during the day, and why some families forbid it unnecessarily. Undoubtedly

children

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are growing up with technology in their hands, they

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born with it. If parents took that away it will create a negative impact on them later on,

children

might try to compare themselves to others, or they would not have familiarity

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how to

use

these devices which may or may not make them feel less of their lives later on in the future. The downside is, they may become slacks and introverted and I think

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what most parents believe in, by banning them from using their phones during school days they might be more active or even smarter,

nonetheless

,

this

is not the case. Sometimes the child needs help with difficult homework

for instance

, what would he do? It is a massive effort to find a piece of information without using the internet to help,

this

is the same as going to libraries back in the day. In my personal perspective,

children

must have a decent length of time to

use

their phones and practice technology on a daily basis, I see that most

children

with a moderated

use

of the internet are more getting intelligent and confident.

To conclude

, technology seized the world at present, and

children

are coming more and more into it, taking that away from them is a huge mistake, a better alternative to

that is

letting them

use

it with daily screen time.