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The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs illustrate the topmost three
pineapple
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-producing countries and it is activity towards exporting
pineapple
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 internationally, in 20009 and 2019. It
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 shows an overview of the
cost
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 analysis in 2019.
Overall
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, trading
pineapple
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 hit the summit in 2019 especially in country A, roughly ten times what it was in 2009.
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 the
cost
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 is considerably high, there are seven factors in total affecting the
cost
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. In 2019, the
pineapple
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 business was very successful, the
cost
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 analysis of each
pineapple
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 individually was broken down into several elements
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 as international transport or taxes. Each company should have an import license which takes 10% of the
cost
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 per
pineapple
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. Taxes are taking 16% and 12% go to international transport, where 4% is going to export costs. Producers take 5% of the total,
therefore
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this
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 leaves us with 35% for distribution and retail
hence
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 it is
cost
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 82% to produce and export, and the rest 18% is profit. Comparing the two years given, in 2009
this
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 business area was poor, and only reached its glory once in country B, but still is not good as it did in 2019.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pineapple, cost with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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