The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane

The diagram illustrates how the

manufacture

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use

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sugar

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cane to produce

sugar

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, there are a total of 7 main steps in

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process

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and 2 choices for harvesting

sugar

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canes

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. Except

from

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harvesting

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and growing part, most of the processes are completed by

mechines

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machines

.

Sugar

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canes

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need around 12-18 months in order to be ready for cutting. In the

process

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of harvesting, the farmer can either collect

sugar

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canes

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using human

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or

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a

truckter

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trucker

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, which can cut and collect a large

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of crops

in

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one time.

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the

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canes

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will be crushed out

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juice

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using a crushing

mechine

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machine

. In order to remove

unwanted

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substance

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, the

juice

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will go through a limestone filter to purify. After the purification

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, the

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will

heat-up

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the purified

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in order to

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water from the

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and thicken it. In the sixth step, they will centrifuge the syrup to

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separate

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crystals from it.

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,

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will

be produce

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after the drying and cooling

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