The table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table chart illustrates how much
money
was spent on items of three different categories in five different Use synonyms
countries
in 2002.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
five Linking Words
countries
paid for food, drinks and tobacco other than two items. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, all of them spent the least Linking Words
for
Change preposition
on
the
leisure and education.
First of all, Correct article usage
apply
items
from Change preposition
for items
food
, drinks and tobacco category, Turkey spent the largest Correct article usage
the food
money
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for
them, the figure was 32.14%. Following that, Ireland took up 28.91%, which was the Change preposition
on
second highest
percentage. Spain accounted for 18.80%, and the rest two Add a hyphen
second-highest
countries
made up nearly 16%.
As for the clothing and footwear section, Italy was the first place, the percentage was 9%. Use synonyms
Second
large Correct article usage
The second
countries
were Ireland, Spain and Turkey, they took up approximately 6% respectively. Use synonyms
Lastly
, Sweden paid the smallest amount of Linking Words
money
on fashion, about 5%.
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Finally
, when it comes to leisure and education, Turkey paid the largest amount of Linking Words
money
, 4.35%. Use synonyms
Next,
Sweden and Italy were Linking Words
on
Change preposition
in
the
second place, they accounted for about 3% each. Ireland and Correct article usage
apply
Spain
citizens spent the smallest amount of Add the possessive form
Spain's
money
on their leisure Use synonyms
activity
, about 2% respectively.Fix the agreement mistake
activities
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words money, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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