The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The provided table illustrates the percentage of expenditure for various goods about products and services in these regions in 2002.
Overall
Linking Words
, It is apparent that the largest proportion of consumers in each country spent on food, drinks and tobacco,
while
Linking Words
leisure and education were activities which had the lowest percentage in the table. Out of the five countries, consumers using food, drinks and tobacco made up noticeably 32.14% in Turkey,
as well as
Linking Words
Ireland comprised under 29%. Turning to
clothing
Change the verb form
clothe
show examples
and footwear in Italy, which had a proportion of consumption to account for 9%, was the largest as the rest of the other countries
while
Linking Words
participating in leisure and education, it was the highest proportion in Turkey, at over 4%. It can be seen that Sweden had the smallest percentage of national consumption for food, drinks and tobacco
as well as
Linking Words
clothing and footwear, respectively at under 16% and just over 5%.
Finally
Linking Words
, Spain almost had these categories which were relatively general, but the lowest figures for leisure and education, at only 1.98%.
Submitted by huuhung1962001 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as, while".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
What to do next:
Look at other essays: