A friend had invited you for a meal at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Thank him/her for inviting you 2. Describe how you felt about his/her family members 3. Make suggestions about his/her visit to your place

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Dear Joshua Butler My name is Injun Lee; I am writing

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letter to express my appreciation in regard to your invitation

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dinner at your house. I was glad to see you having a meal in your accommodation on the 29th of April, which was your birthday. I was pleased with having an opportunity to see your kid and parents during that time. our parents' handmade dishes were so tasty and fascinating,

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, I couldn't stop eating food, especially

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pasta.

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, your baby was so adorable and totally resembled

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you. I will not forget the time when your baby was approaching

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me like a little angel and it was so lovely. Next time, I want your family members to visit my house. Recently, I am dwelling in a bigger size of

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than I used to have and there is a garden for a BBQ place. I am going to prepare some meat and drinks ,especially for you. Please let me know when you are available to organise the appointment. Yours sincerely, Injun Lee

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

178 words

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A friend had invited you for a meal at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Thank him/her for inviting you 2. Describe how you felt about his/her family members 3. Make suggestions about his/her visit to your place

Nowadays many people wear western clothes rather than their traditional clothes. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?

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