Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think this is good for the world of sport, while others think it is negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some

people

regard positively that many businesses are gaining popularity through establishing co-operative projects with

sports

though, others regard

this

situation as

disadvantageous

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trend. I, personally,

in

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favor

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of sponsorship in the

sports

world. It is apparent that a number of applications coming from advertising are arguably considered practical for sportsmen and

sports

itself. Commercial sponsorship of athletes with popular companies can make up a considerable proportion of their

overall

income.

As a result

, expenses of day-to-day life including the costs of food, travelling and

a

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proper training, are somewhat covered by the payment companies offer. Another common argument has to do with audiences of

sport

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events whose numbers are gradually decreasing. With the growing interest of

people

in

sports

, the revenue of sponsorship can not only

be result

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in a perfect performance of an athlete

,

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but

also

promoting of organizing tournaments and championships globally.

Nevertheless

, some of

disadvantages

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the disadvantages

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of

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interference of companies in

sports

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section should not be overlooked. Primarily, the main argument is inexorably linked with mispresenting the core terms of

sport

.

Ubiquity

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of

adds

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in every

sport related

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events

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and

products

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can inevitably make an established conception of

people

in

sports

confused. Take 1xbet as an example, with the result of constant promoting action by even popular sportsmen to

this

commercial platform, many

people

are drawn by

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attractive quality of money.

Thus

, many spectators are

being

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intrigued

in

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sport

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events in pursuit of making a fortune,

however

, not for enjoying. In conclusion, despite the fact of some drawbacks can be seen in the accompanying of business and

sport

, I generally agree

with

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that commercial

relationship

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relationships

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between these sectors can be beneficial in many respects.