You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

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Dear Mahesh, Hope you and your family are doing well. I'm very glad to know that you've

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decided to take driving seriously. Driving has proven quite a

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beneficial to me in recent days. It has become my primary mode of commuting to my workplace for the past couple of months. Driving will give you the freedom to travel around mainly to our workplaces, and nearby stores and will be very helpful to working people like us. Another main advantage will be not going through the hassle of the city and waiting in long queues to get on public transport.

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during the weekends to the nearby getaways and we'll really start exploring and enjoying the nature around us. There are a

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of driving schools in our community, but the one that I had the best experience with was the Ace Driving School. They were really helpful from the beginning of my driving journey, right from teaching to getting me my license. They have really helped me a

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in excelling in the joy of driving.

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driving please take extra caution on the speed limits mainly near pedestrian zones and school zones, because major accidents might cause around these areas

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over-speeding. I am really glad to tell you more about driving and hope you take me on the drive after you acquire your license. Best regards, Mohan Krishna K

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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243 words

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs ( for example, working for a charity, improving the neighborhood, or teaching sports to younger children) to what extent do you agree or disagree?

some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

People are starting to think that the idea of having a single career is an old fashioned one and that having several part-time jobs is better. Do the benefits outweigh the disadvantage?

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuess both these views and give your own opinion.