Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mix schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is a fact that
,
the concept of mixed Remove the comma
apply
school
is a controversial subject in which some people opine that having separate Use synonyms
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school
for Fix the agreement mistake
schools
both
Use synonyms
gender
is more advantageous but Change to a plural noun
genders
while
others think the opposite way. In my opinion, I strongly support the mixed Linking Words
school
system and I will explain Use synonyms
both
views with relevant examples.
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To begin
, there are many advantages vested in attending mixed schools. Linking Words
Firstly
, it generates equality Linking Words
among
the mindset of children.So they have a feeling of social acceptance Change preposition
in
each
other.Change preposition
of each
Secondly
, Linking Words
while
studying with girls,boys can enhance their positive attitude towards the opposite sex. Linking Words
For example
, the American psychological association point out that, mixed schools cherish more empathy and positive Call existence among Linking Words
both
Use synonyms
gender
.Change to a plural noun
genders
Therefore
, in the future when they reach Linking Words
their
adulthood, they can have Correct pronoun usage
apply
good
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a good
relationship
with Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
women
. Use synonyms
Finally
, it mobilizes social solidarity and reduces inequality and Linking Words
desparity
among people.
Correct your spelling
disparity
On the other hand
,in many countries their religious leaders Linking Words
against
the idea of Add a missing verb
are against
mixed
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the mixed
school
system because they are thinking it will against their moral values.Use synonyms
Furthermore
some Linking Words
cultural
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cultures
believes
that Replace the word
beliefs
women
are only for household work and Use synonyms
upbringing
Correct article usage
the upbringing
children
, Change preposition
of children
while
men are the central power of society.Linking Words
Consequently
,all these cultural identities increased violence among Linking Words
women
.To illustrate Use synonyms
this
, the terrorist group Linking Words
thaliban
attacked Malala Yusaf Khan Correct your spelling
Taliban
during
the year 2010 because she continued her studies in Pakistan. Change preposition
in
According to
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Correct article usage
the thaliban
thaliban
,Correct your spelling
Taliban
woman
are not allowed to educate, whoever Fix the agreement mistake
women
denied
they execute them publicly.So in my view, Add a missing verb
is denied
both
men and Use synonyms
women
are equal and everyone Use synonyms
have
their own opportunity to develop.
In conclusion, Correct subject-verb agreement
has
women
are an essential part of society and they have their own capability to bring enormous changes in our society.So as Use synonyms
a
human being our responsibility to accept everyone regardless of their gender.Correct article usage
apply
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