It is a fact that
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the concept of mixed
school
is a controversial subject in which some people opine that having separate
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for
both
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is more advantageous but
while
others think the opposite way. In my opinion, I strongly support the mixed
school
system and I will explain
both
views with relevant examples.
To begin
, there are many advantages vested in attending mixed schools.
Firstly
, it generates equality
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the mindset of children.So they have a feeling of social acceptance
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other.
Secondly
,
while
studying with girls,boys can enhance their positive attitude towards the opposite sex.
For example
, the American psychological association point out that, mixed schools cherish more empathy and positive Call existence among
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.
Therefore
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adulthood, they can have
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with
women
.
Finally
, it mobilizes social solidarity and reduces inequality and
among people.
On the other hand
,in many countries their religious leaders
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the idea of
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school
system because they are thinking it will against their moral values.
Furthermore
some
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that
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,
while
men are the central power of society.
Consequently
,all these cultural identities increased violence among
women
.To illustrate
this
, the terrorist group
attacked Malala Yusaf Khan
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the year 2010 because she continued her studies in Pakistan.
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are not allowed to educate, whoever
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they execute them publicly.So in my view,
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women
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their own opportunity to develop.
In conclusion,
women
are an essential part of society and they have their own capability to bring enormous changes in our society.So as
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human being our responsibility to accept everyone regardless of their gender.