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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles, others think there are other better ways. *Discuss both sides and give your opinion.*

#people #road #safety #limits #vehicles #*discuss
One of the social concerns today relates is how to make the
roads
 safer.
While
 it is widely believed that we can improve is by reducing the speed of
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vehicles
,
however
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 others believe that some different ways to make
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 road. I will discuss both views and give my opinion. On the one hand, it is argued by some that why people should drive
vehicles
 slowly. The main reason is that safe for everyone. It is
also
 possible to say that driving too fast is dangerous. One illustration of
this
 is many traffic accidents when drivers drive fast. Another reason is speed and overload.
Vehicles
such
 as trucks,
cars
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 always carry an excess of
good
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, weight making the
roads
more
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sloppy.
For example
, there are many holes in the road.
On the other hand
, it is strongly believed by
other
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 that we have a lot of other better ways. People often have
this
 opinion because it has many causes of
unsafed
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unsafe
unsaved
 on the
roads
 like building more the big and wide
roads
. A second point is
that
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pollution, when use
the
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vehicles
 are burning too much fuel. It’s will make many diseases in the future. A particularly good example here
are
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reduce
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 disease,
increase
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 safety. In conclusion, all of the above views are very reasonable. Personally, I tend to believe that views are can make the
roads
 safer and improve more in future.
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