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The picture below illustrates how olive oil is made. Write a report for your tutor describing the production process.

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The given diagram demonstrates how the
step
-by-
step
 processes happen to produce quality olive
oil
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 there are eleven steps in
this
 process. Starting with
harvest
Replace the word
harvesting
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 olives and ending with producing olive
oil
. First of all, the best olives are picked and put into the machine and
then
 stored and passed to the next process.
Second,
they are washed with clean water to remove all dirt. After that
step
, they will be moved to the process of removing the leaves, which is
also
 the
last
step
 in the preparation
step
.
Next,
only after being pulverized and
then
 mixed. Move to the next stage,
that
Correct determiner usage
the
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 mixture is ​​delivered to
decanter
Correct article usage
the decanter
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It
Correct pronoun usage
Which
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 is the place to press the powder into water and remove unnecessary pomace. We have the ninth
step
 with
oil
Correct article usage
the oil
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 polisher which Will separate the olive
oil
 and
waste water
Correct your spelling
wastewater
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 from each other.
Finally
, clean olive
oil
 has been produced to be delivered to the consumer.
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