You recently bought a piece of sports emunrent from an online store. When You first used the piece of sports equipment, you found a problem with it. Write a letter to the manager of the online store. In your letter describe the problem with the piece of sports equipment • • • say what happened because of the problem explain what you would like the company to do.
Dear Sir,
I am John living in Sydney. I am writing to you about the problem regarding the helmet which I bought from your online store.
First of all, I purchased a helmet for personal use on 11 March 2023 from the cricket fan store. I ordered online from your site and paid online $75. The reference number is S7437LLX. That helmet is much
loose
and Correct word choice
looser
dropped
automatically because it does not have a tight grip on the edges.
Moving on, Wrong verb form
drops
due to
the loose structure and feeling uncomfortable while
it wearing. I was unable to perform best and lost the chance to play at the state level. This
is a great loss for me. I also
found that it is not the original element of Maxbuzz,despite a copy of this
brand.
Finally
, I would like to appreciate it if you favour me and refund my money as soon as possible because I am not satisfied with the service provided by your store. If you find any further
information please let me know on my email ID is [email protected]
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
John Mith.Submitted by parvinderp93 on
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task response
Include specific details such as the date of purchase and the product details for better clarity.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to include a formal greeting and closing to the letter to the store manager.