Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can the government do to address the problem? What can the individuals do …?

There are argumentative perspectives heating a debate about how to decrease

human’s

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impact on the environment.

While

some claim that

due to

improper human activities, the opposite makes a statement that the governor and the individual can do something to tackle

this

trouble.

While

each has its own perks, I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned factors. Without a shadow of a doubt, there are a great many methods for humans to destroy the environment, especially

air

pollution

. The main cause of

this

problem

is a lot of

people

use

fuel-powered

vehicles

such

as motorbikes and 4-wheeled

vehicles

which produce toxic fumes into the atmosphere.

For instance

, in

Vietnam

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a great deal of

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a lot of

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people

use

motorbikes and automobiles to participate in traffic which causes the

problem

of

air

pollution

.

Thus

, the increase in the

use

of private

vehicles

causes the dire status of global warming.

While

the

people

's damaging way is widely acknowledged, the state and the individual should join hands in resolving

this

problem

. The governor introduces taxes to encourage

people

to

use

environmentally-friendly

vehicles

and

people

are using more public

transportations

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transportation

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run by alternative energy resources.

For example

, the government will reduce taxes for those who buy Vinfast electric cars and

people

are encouraged to

use

mass transit like Vinbus ,

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train stations.

Hence

, the state and

individual

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individuals

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should combine to reduce

air

pollution

. In conclusion ,

air

pollution

is a serious

problem

brought by humans so it is necessary for the authorities and individuals to solve the problems.