Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can the government do to address the problem? What can the individuals do …?

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impact on the environment.

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some claim that

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improper human activities, the opposite makes a statement that the governor and the individual can do something to tackle

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trouble.

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each has its own perks, I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned factors. Without a shadow of a doubt, there are a great many methods for humans to destroy the environment, especially

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pollution

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. The main cause of

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problem

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is a lot of

people

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use

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fuel-powered

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as motorbikes and 4-wheeled

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which produce toxic fumes into the atmosphere.

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, in

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a great deal of

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people

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use

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motorbikes and automobiles to participate in traffic which causes the

problem

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of

air

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pollution

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.

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, the increase in the

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of private

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causes the dire status of global warming.

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the

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's damaging way is widely acknowledged, the state and the individual should join hands in resolving

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problem

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. The governor introduces taxes to encourage

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to

use

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environmentally-friendly

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and

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are using more public

transportations

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run by alternative energy resources.

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, the government will reduce taxes for those who buy Vinfast electric cars and

people

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are encouraged to

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mass transit like Vinbus ,

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train stations.

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, the state and

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should combine to reduce

air

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pollution

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. In conclusion ,

air

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pollution

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is a serious

problem

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brought by humans so it is necessary for the authorities and individuals to solve the problems.