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Some feel that movies and tv shows are a good way to study history despite their lack of historical accuracy at times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#feel #movies #tv #study #history #lack #accuracy #times
There is an argument about
efficiency
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 of
movies
 with historical subjects regarded to their lack of accurate details. I believe that it can be successful in taking the individuals' attention, so to some extent, I completely agree.
History
 has a significant role in any country's culture,
thus
 It is truly essential for any community to be informed about
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its
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encestors'
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ancestors
ancestor's
 life
story
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stories
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.
For
this
 reason, TV shows or Films especially can catch youngsters' eye which can lead to a desire toward studying
history
.
Moreover
, It is able to give information about the past,
such
 as ancient norms and behaviours.
For example
, when I was
student
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a student
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, I watched a movie about the ancient city of Troy, It could give me lots of information about
Greek's
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Greek
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history
.
Hence
, in order to study
the
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history
, these methods can be useful.
While
movies
 with
historical
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the historical
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concept
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concepts
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 are
benefical
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beneficial
, sometimes their lack of historical accuracy can cause issues.
Firstly
, It gives false details about the past which can have consequences.
For instance
, I have seen 300, a movie about the war between ancient Greece and
Persian
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the Persian
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 empire
that is
 contain lots of historical
error
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errors
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.
Secondly
, sometimes political forces make
deliberately
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 changes in
history
 which should be prohibited.
Finally
, on
hisorical
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historical
 subjects more often there is not a clear
reasponse
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response
for
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to
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 some questions which could raise
in
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apply
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accuracy in
movies
. In conclusion, folks should be fascinated to study
history
with
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 several ways
which
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apply
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one of
them
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which
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 can be TV shows or
movies
.
While
movies
 have
inaccuracy
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an inaccuracy
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 in historical detail, I think
it
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they
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 can be productive in informing people.
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