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Some people believe that spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some
people
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 argue that verbal
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 is always advantageous compared with
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 done by
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. I wholeheartedly agree with
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 idea. First of all, spoken
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 contains a lot of elements written forms do not have, which facilitate conveying information. Sentences produced verbally possess not only direct meanings of words themselves but
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 pitches, rhythms, the speed of pronunciation and
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 facial
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 and gestures, enabling
people
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 to clearly state what is
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 intention and emotion behind the conversation.
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,
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 can take advantage of its nature so that they can persuade or convince others, or even counterfeit strangers.
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, Steve Jobs used
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 a beneficial aspect of spoken language in a meticulous way, making
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 trust his products and his charismatic character as well.
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 to these important factors found in verbal data, communicating orally is more
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instantaneous
 and flexible than written texts. Immediate responses from others are helpful to reflect own thoughts and consider what should be said next because speakers can tell whether they do a straightforward and fascinating conversation or not.
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,
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 can change their content or the way of choosing words without delay when listers are confused or struggle to comprehend, which is impossible during texting.
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, notable politicians can change which matters they had better handle during their speech in front of
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 to impress them and ensure votes in
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 next election for a short time.
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, in my opinion, because of a plethora of important constituents and
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 and immediate nature of verbal
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, it is more beneficial than written
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.
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