Your friend just had a baby. You decided to prepare a present for them. Write a letter and say : 1. Congratulate your friend 2. Ask when would be possible for you to visit 3. Ask what present they would like.

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Hello Aman Hope you are doing well. I am writing
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for a gift. I am so happy for you because now you become a mother. I congratulate you from my heart. I know it would be difficult for you to manage both work and home. Just tell me whenever you would be free from work so that we will meet you. I have many gifts in my mind but
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cannot decide. Please help me to decide the present which would be helpful for you
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. I am super happy to see you and our little prince. yours Raman
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • heartfelt congratulations
  • bundle of joy
  • adjustment period
  • suitable time
  • cherished gift
  • newfound responsibilities
  • practical assistance
  • joyous occasion
  • unwavering support
  • looking forward
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