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Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the benefits of this outweigh the problems?

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Globalization is increasing the indispensable requirement for international
language
 which facilitates
communication
 in business and education. more and more people are inclined to the idea of one collective
language
 used by everyone despite its inevitable damage. linguistic scientists and experts have publicly concealed seemingly insurmountable obstacles in human and machine translation.
this
 could be attributed to innate cultural roots in each
language
 which are overlooked or neglected in the translation process, leading to a
communication
 breakdown.
moreover
, the tones and stresses within expressed sentences are crucial verbal elements for speakers and without them, the concept of interpreted
language
 can be misunderstood.
Therefore
, we could tentatively conclude that translation from one
language
 to another might not appear to be the best solution to resolve the problems arising from international
communication
. A new
language
 designed to
fulfill
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 similar purposes is required. Some professionals are looking for alternative solutions and set their sights on English. Unsurprisingly, English has risen to predominance and been widely accepted by the general population as the main
language
 medium for occasions like business conferences, and chatting.
However
, one of the direct ethical issues that need to be addressed would have been the elimination of a plethora of minority languages, as people from around the globe rushed to pick up a foreign
language
.
In addition
, the job of translators and interpreters would
also
 be much simplified as the availability of a new international
language
 could save the troubles of learning many different languages. Despite the challenges involved m learning an entirely novel
language
, it is absolutely a viable and effective approach in modern
communication
 in the long run. What is in store for us in the near future, if universal acceptance of a standard
language
 could be achieved, would be a world of seamless
communication
 transcending barriers of all sorts.
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