You recently received an invitation for three day training program which should benefit you and the company. Write a letter to your manager and say. Ask To attend this program Describe the program Explain how the will benefit the company

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Dear Sir/Madam,

This

is with reference to the invitation that I received from XYZ financing for three days training program on advanced sales and technology.

Moreover

this

event is one of a kind as we do not see any

such

events with technology implementations.

To begin

with, the event is going to be held from the 10th to the 12th of next month in Mumbai.

Additionally

this

occasion will be headed by nonother than Mr Ratan Tata, who will be speaking on the effect of automation on sales and how it goes hand in hand with technology.

Furthermore

this

affair is going to help our company as you know we are going to upskill our sales team.

Therefore

, I think

this

occasion will certainly help us personally and the organization

Hence

, hope we get

this

golden opportunity to attend the event and make maximum use of it. Thanking you for the consideration Yours Faithfully, Ranjan

Submitted by soumya.khatua on Sat Apr 01 2023

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155 words

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