Opinions on food are changing rapidly and there are many who believe that everyone should follow a vegetarian diet because it would have a positive impact on our health and the environment. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In

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modernized world, fast food has become a

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dish of the young generation, which triggers a plethora of diseases.

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, the public

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that it is extremely beneficial for people to be on a vegetarian diet

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the fact that it could positively influence not only

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our bodies but

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the environment. From my point of view, I’m on the same page with

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statement. In the first place, I suppose that a diet without meat could strengthen the health of residents. In

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way of saying, fruits and vegetables provide a number of vitamins so that people can avoid several illnesses and

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increase their resistance.

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, dwellers could keep fit

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the fact that those types of food contain a low level of calories.

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, athletes make use of apples before operating owing to

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ability to serve them

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energy and help their

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better. Moving onto the next point, it is undeniable that the environment could be more and more clean and fresh

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the level of consuming vegetables goes up, the public

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encouraged to plant more trees to meet

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demands

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thems

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.

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, there is a huge amount of oxygen in the air and the waste from animals can

be lessen

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.

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, the atmosphere of the area of

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is regularly comfortable on the grounds that the monks use

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type of food on a daily basis. In conclusion, the government should propagandize the dwellers to take advantage of eating vegetables and fruits

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of meats.