UNIVERSITY STUDENTS ARE INCREASINGLY STUDYING ABROAD AS PART OF THEIR STUDIES. DO THE ADVANTANGES OF STUDYING ABROAD OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES?

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level of education so the youth tends to the different state.
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and other parts of
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places tremendously ascend abroad as a part of their education levels. That tendency has a number of benefits
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but
also
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studying
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famous over the world and the student choose the various place which their site a lot of
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indegenious
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things like a meal, a
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gorgeous
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.
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people have
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feelings during
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travel.
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adolescents have a chance and for the reason, they apply to university. The statistics report shows each year millions of youths
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university. Another example is
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abroad studying
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plenty of
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have friends
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various
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like Europe , North America and
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Asia
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so that situation
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them
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social life.
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, there are some disadvantages
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another country
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most people do not know
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area for the reason
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few accidents.
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by
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a mental illness but
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action is cheating because the tourists do not know
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and
that is
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in the state. In conclusion, I would maintain that all
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students
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have more practical experiences
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the
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abroad
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, I hope each
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and women reach the target
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life
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