You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: Explain your varied achievements over the past two years Express your interest in growing with the company Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr. Phillips,

Dear Mr Phillips, I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in the newly open Store manager position in our
company
.Past two years I have been working in the
company
and I believe that I have completed all requirements for
this
promotion. Since the day, I joined I always been very eager to learn new things, and
as a result
,I had completed all my training courses before the deadlines.
moreover
, I won the employee of the year award and recognize by the
company
CEO several times.I had trained many new joiners and they all are performing very well. Past two years, my contribution is at the top level and we were able to achieve record-breaking sales performance under my supervision,
therefore
, I am looking for financial growth for myself which can benefit our
company
's growth. I would like to meet you in person to discuss more regarding
this
opportunity please let me know the meeting schedule as soon at the earliest. Sincerely, Mike Keen
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