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The chart below shows information about subway systems in three major European cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

The chart below shows information about subway systems in three major European cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
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The given table illustrates detailed information about the
subway
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system
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 in three major cities of Europe namely
London
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,
Paris
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 and
Moscow
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. Here we can observe that the
London
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 Underground
system
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 is of maximum length
whereas
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Paris
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 Metro is of minimum. In the case of England's capital City, the length is 408 km
while
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 for
Paris
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 it is 214 km. 
However
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, the
subway
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system
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 covers the highest number of stations in
Paris
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 but the lowest in
Moscow
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. The count is 300 and 182 for
Paris
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 and
Moscow
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 respectively. The number of stations where
London
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's metro take stop is considerably high when compared to
Moscow
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 and is less than
Paris
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 only by 25. Though
Moscow
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's track length is average and is 300 km, it has the highest of people relying on the
subway
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system
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 on daily basis, which is 6.5 million. Even after having the lengthiest track among the trio,
London
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's daily traveller is 3 million, making it the
Subway
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system
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 which is serving the lowest number of passengers.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words subway, system, london, paris, moscow with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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