The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.Average distance in miles travelled per person per year
this
table chart displays the changes in travel style in England between 1985 and 2000.
Overall
, cars, long-distance
buses and trains also
taxis further
other kinds of styles were increased year after year.while
walking, bicycle and local bus were decreased. Furthermore
,In 1985 the average total distance
was 4,740 miles
whilst the distance
increased in 2000 to reach 6,475.
Looking in more detail, starting with cars, in 1985 was 3199 miles
and consistently moved up in distance
to reach 4806 miles
in 2000. while
local bus begins with high distance
which was 429 but then
devalued about quarter to reach 274 in 2000.
On the other hand
, Long distance
buses slightly increased from 54 in 1985 to 124 in 2000 compared with trains it
begins with just 289 in 1985 and to rose 366 in 2000.
Correct pronoun usage
which
Fix the agreement mistake
Bicycles
Bicycle
had Add an article
The bicycle
changes
slightly devalued from 51 in 1985 to 41 in 2000. Change the verb form
changed
However
, taxis were
recovered Unnecessary verb
apply
slighty
from 13 Correct your spelling
slightly
miles
in 1985 to reach 42 miles
in 2000.Submitted by rama on
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