The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The following chart illustrates the
percentage
of
households
in owned and rented
accommodation
in two given countries ( England and Wales ) from 1918 and 2011.
Overall
, the
percentage
of
households
in rented
accommodation
increased from 1918 to 1961. In 1971, the
percentage
of both owned and rented are the same. The
percentage
of
households
in rented
accommodation
increased between 1981 to 2011. In
households
in rented
accommodation
,
firstly
, it increased between 1918 to 1939 from 21% to 31%. It steadily between 1939 and 1953 by 31%. It steadily increased in 4 decades which is between 1961 to 2001 from 40% to 70%.
However
, in the end, it went down by 68%. the
percentage
of
households
owned, between 1918 to 1939 reduced from 78% to 69%. It steadily from 1939 to 1953 by 69%. It steadily reduced from 59% to 31%. In the end, it slowly went up by 37%.
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  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
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