The graph below shows how people buy music. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows how people buy music. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph compares the rates at which
streams
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,
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CD
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CDs
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purchased and
downloads
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were sold from 2011 to 2018.
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, it can be seen from the graph that the
streams
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of
music
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grew over the years,
while
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CD
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purchased
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declined.
Downloads
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had quite a different trend as
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its
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sales
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fluctuatesw
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. In 2011, the
sales
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of
CD
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was by far the highest, attracting almost, 60%
sale
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. Downloading of
music
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was the Second leading
sales
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of
music
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with, approximately 35% and
streams
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recorded the least that year with about 5%
sales
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. The
music
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streams
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began to rise continuously
whereas
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,
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CD's
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purchased started dropping each year. By 2016,
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streams
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sales
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overtook
CD
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purchased
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and
downloads
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. By 2018, streaming
music
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was the leading
sales
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of
music
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with, around 41%.
Downloads
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of
music
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kept on growing until 2014,
where
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it
begun
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to experience a downward trend.
At the end
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of the period,
it
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its
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downloads
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are was the second leading
sales
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of
music
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with exactly 30%
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of sale
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sale
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sales
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.
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CD's
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purchased
continue
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to decrease, and
downloads
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of
music
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were even able to overtake them in 2013. By the end of the time ,frame
CD
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's purchased recorded the least
sales
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of
music
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Vocabulary: Replace the words streams, cd, downloads, music, sales with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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