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The graph below shows how people buy music. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows how people buy music. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph compares the rates at which
streams
,
CD
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CDs
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 purchased and
downloads
 were sold from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, it can be seen from the graph that the
streams
 of
music
 grew over the years,
while
CD
purchased
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 declined.
Downloads
 had quite a different trend as
it
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its
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sales
fluctuatesw
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fluctuate
. In 2011, the
sales
 of
CD
 was by far the highest, attracting almost, 60%
sale
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of sale
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 . Downloading of
music
 was the Second leading
sales
 of
music
 with, approximately 35% and
streams
 recorded the least that year with about 5%
sales
. The
music
streams
 began to rise continuously
whereas
,
CD's
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CDs
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 purchased started dropping each year. By 2016,
streams
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stream
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sales
 overtook
CD
purchased
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purchases
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and
downloads
. By 2018, streaming
music
 was the leading
sales
 of
music
 with, around 41%.
Downloads
 of
music
 kept on growing until 2014,
where
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it
begun
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began
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to experience a downward trend.
At the end
 of the period,
it
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its
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downloads
 are was the second leading
sales
 of
music
 with exactly 30%
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of sale
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sale
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sales
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.
CD's
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CDs
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 purchased
continue
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to continue
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 to decrease, and
downloads
 of
music
 were even able to overtake them in 2013. By the end of the time ,frame
CD
's purchased recorded the least
sales
 of
music
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Vocabulary: Replace the words streams, cd, downloads, music, sales with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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